Babysitter

Editorial Has potential

Babysitter is a short but promising submission that leans into subjugation and petplay fantasy, with a blackmail-driven escalation structure that several players found compelling—especially those drawn to the game's explicit power-exchange themes. The core appeal is clear: responsive writing that acknowledges player compliance or defiance, and the premise of two 18-year-old antagonists gradually enslaving their handler. However, the build suffers from pacing and continuity problems that actively damage immersion. Timeline inconsistencies (two hours passing off-screen, a skipped dinner scene), binary choices that force a single correct path or immediate game-over, mismatched character art styles, and the somewhat strained "babysitter for teenagers" framing all accumulate into a rough, early-stage experience. The developer has signaled intent to slow escalation and revise, which is encouraging; the creative idea is sound, but execution needs significant polish before the story can breathe.