A Hair Loss Treatment

Editorial Has potential

A Hair Loss Treatment is a transformation (MTF) visual novel built in Twine with a story-driven narrative that players consistently praise for its scope and care. The dev, a trans creator, has shipped substantial content across multiple routes (dating Rosie, Grant, Abi, or Paul, plus optional pregnancy and sex work paths), and recent updates have expanded the experience further. Community sentiment is broadly positive: players value the writing quality and the amount of accumulated work, though opinion divides on execution. The main creative friction is the game's deceptive title—it signals a comedy in the style of Leisure Suit Larry, not a gender transformation fantasy, catching some players off-guard. A secondary divide exists over path design: some players report lesbian content remaining available even when pursuing men, or difficulty accessing specific romance scenes depending on choices made. AI-written dialogue is evident in verbose, metaphor-heavy descriptions that some find immersive and others tedious. The build is playable but unfinished: the open-world segment is acknowledged as effectively incomplete, and mobile/browser support remains unavailable despite demand. Shallow community feedback on certain routes and mechanics suggests documentation could improve discovery.